I like the title! How about if you go back and write about joining the team and your first training sessions--try a chronological approach first. Show us what a work-out was like at the beginning, maybe your first race, pick a few memorable snapshots from your season. Describe running/walking/gaspng through the streets and woods, wherever your team ran. Then you can move things around to start in middle of that first "running-the-whole-way" race. Don't feel like it has to come out "right" the first time around--just get some details down. Look at Anne Lamott's essay "shitty first drafts" in the text for inspiration!!
-Im 18
-I have a boyfriend named Andrew
-90409<3
-Im always at Taco Bell
-After BCC i'm hoping to go to fashion school
-I work at Burger King near the harbour mall
-Add me on facebook, myspace or aim(famouslyfierce)
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I like the title! How about if you go back and write about joining the team and your first training sessions--try a chronological approach first. Show us what a work-out was like at the beginning, maybe your first race, pick a few memorable snapshots from your season. Describe running/walking/gaspng through the streets and woods, wherever your team ran. Then you can move things around to start in middle of that first "running-the-whole-way" race. Don't feel like it has to come out "right" the first time around--just get some details down. Look at Anne Lamott's essay "shitty first drafts" in the text for inspiration!!
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